May 17, 2012

Comment for a Cure to MSA

Thank you to everyone who has emailed me or commented to offer their condolences. It means a lot to me and my family to know that others have been there or just that they’re thinking of us. My Dad has suffered from Multiple System Atrophy (MSA) for several years, so this wasn’t entirely unexpected. But it’s never easy to lose a close family member.

As a thank you and as a tribute to Dad, I’m going to support the National Dysautonomia Research Foundation by donating $1 for every comment this blog receives between August 23 and September 30 (up to $500). Instead of just writing a check, I hope to raise a little awareness, too.

Lack of knowledge about MSA poses a major challenge to patients and their families. We know that the disease causes hypotension, failure of muscle coordination, and other symptoms, but there’s next to nothing known about why people get it or how to treat it.

MSA doesn’t have a celebrity spokesperson, an awareness month, or a network TV special, so my understanding is that it’s tough to get funding for research. All you can really do is try to make the patient as comfortable as possible, as they slowly wither away. We did our best with Netflix, BookSwim, and frequent visits.

My Dad was a Renaissance man who committed himself to science and philanthropy, so I know he would have wanted me to support scientific research on MSA. Thank you again for everyone’s emotional support.

Death in the Family

My father passed away this afternoon. My mom didn’t want to tell me on the phone, since I was alone in my apartment. But I knew from her deliberate lack of detail what had happened. I’d been expecting it, but not so soon. Please excuse the sporadic posts over the next few weeks, as I focus on family and healing.

Which Comes First: The Source or the Story?

It’s a fine line. You don’t want to get a source’s hopes up by promising her coverage Big Name Month Mag (or waste your time doing tons of legwork on an article that may never see print), but you also don’t want to disappoint an editor by pitching her an interview with a source you can’t deliver.

I got into hot water once because I got my editor excited about a story, then couldn’t get the source to return my emails. This was a profile piece, so we had to scrap it completely, but at least I’d worked with the editor on several other stories, so she knew I wasn’t a total flake. Still, I did lose some face with that one and learned a tough lesson.

I’ve come to the conclusion that if the article is one where you could slot in any number of sources, then you can pitch it by saying “potential sources include Jane Doe, author of….” The phrase “potential sources” is key because it shows the editor that you’re given it some thought, but you’re flexible enough to consider alternate sources.

Jane might have written a killer book on DIY fashion or interracial dating, but chances are, you can find another expert if you have to. Since the article does not hinge on her opinions about a highly specific topic, you can wait until you have an official assignment before you email her publicist (some will happily forward you background information and others will give you the cold shoulder at this stage).

If, on the other hand, you hope to pitch a profile, then you should make sure that your source is receptive before you get an editor involved. Recently I had a slew of potential sources refuse interviews for reasons I never would have anticipated (fortunately, I didn’t pitch the article and it didn’t have super-specific requirements, so I was in the clear). You might assume that Jane Doe would be thrilled to do an interview and promote her book, but she might have her own reasons for not wanting her profile to appear in a certain publication. Or maybe she’s so busy doing interviews with The New Yorker and Rolling Stone that she doesn’t want to spend her precious time on a mid-sized magazine. If it’s an article with a variety of sources, you can just find another one, but if it’s a profile, well, you’re kind of screwed.

During the query stage, it’s important to emphasize to your source that you are hoping to write an article about her, but it’s not a sure bet. If you can get away with saying “I’d like to pitch this to women’s magazines” or “I’m going to shop this idea around to some travel websites” instead of dropping specific names like Cosmo or Concierge.com, so much the better. You don’t want them to get their heart set on a certain publication, but some people will press you for details. This is something I still struggle with!

Another strategy is to reuse sources you’ve used in the past. It’s (generally) a safe bet that if someone was willing to talk to you in the past, they will probably be receptive to doing another interview in the future. I wrote a profile about a young businessowner who was so excited to see her story published online that I had a hunch she’d be happy to do it over again for a feature article in a different pub. I was right. Plus, you can often include unused bits from your original interview to beef up your new query.

What do you think? Do you usually conduct a pre-interview when you’re writing a query? How do you explain this to sources? Any other thoughts on the topic?

Get Your Monthly Fix of The Urban Muse

Several freelance writers I know swear by the marketing power of their monthly newsletter, so I’ve decided to give it a try. I write lots of email newsletters for clients, so why not write my own, too? Starting in September, I will be sending out The Urban Museletter once a month.

I anticipate including highlights from the blog, but there will be original content, too: writing tips, tidbits, and possibly a few interviews with other freelancers or book reviews thrown in.

To build up my subscriber list, I’m offering a little incentive to those who subscribe by next Monday, August 25. I will choose one reader at random to receive a free copy of MAP Boston (or the equivalent in Amazon.com dollars if you have no plans to visit Beantown). Though I can’t promise freebies every month, I do hope to make them a semi-regular happening. Sign up here.